I see you dressed in white
Skin colour mocha lite
Between your full lips mint tea flows
Believe me I surely know
How brilliantly you glow
Brightness of gaze
Endless legs
Brilliance of sun
I am the one
You constantly stun
Virtual lover lovely friend
There’s no need to pretend
You hear the sound
of my heart as it pounds
With the love I have found
Brightness of gaze
Our hearts beat in phase
Brilliance of sun
You are the one
For whom I will always come
Brilliantly done Rick !!! Btw .. who was it written for
By: Nave on May 31, 2008
at 7:35 pm
“Brilliance of Sun” is written for my muse, Hanna.
Hanna is the owner of the Storytellers § Poets community on Orkut.
I finished the poem a few days ago and then just today I realized that it is not a single poem that stands alone. It is the third leg of a trilogy of poems that celebrate the incomparable Hanna.
“Three rays of light” and “Emerald seas” are the first two legs.
GO FIGURE !
By: post4apocalypse on May 31, 2008
at 7:48 pm
Right on, brother. Nice work. Really love this one.
By: Randy on June 21, 2008
at 7:45 pm